(To Vikas who made this sketch,and thus gave my mind food for thought..keep drawing pal)
my head rests against the pillow
i lie in a deep sojourn of my mind
the naked darkness envelopes my whole
emnating from the sky
i remember the happenings of my youth
i seek the remnants of some joy
as my present is nothing but numb
an empty shell of a boy
the journey is a thought process
bringing the ghost of christmas past
i'll take u to the summer when
the seeds of this present were cast
i played along happily
along the stream that flowed nearby
then suddenly in slow motion'
rain fell down from the sky
my feet were streaked with the wet earth
the husky effervescence enveloped my mind
i felt the mud moulding beneath my hands
as i created my first figure with thine
enter now:the ghost of christmas present
i lay unknown on this berth
for i was taken straight from childhood
to an unyielding adult
my creativity was lost in the tomb of imitance
as art does not bring food to the table
the boy who once played abandoned
now lies chained to the daily syllablle
i do not wish to see the ghost of the future
as my present subdued my hungry talent
who had felt the need to create
which in this world of material is irrelevant
my tired mind shuts its musings
as i have to get up early tomorrow
to go to work,which i do not love
but life goes on,even with sorrow..
my head rests against the pillow
i lie in a deep sojourn of my mind
the naked darkness envelopes my whole
emnating from the sky
i remember the happenings of my youth
i seek the remnants of some joy
as my present is nothing but numb
an empty shell of a boy
the journey is a thought process
bringing the ghost of christmas past
i'll take u to the summer when
the seeds of this present were cast
i played along happily
along the stream that flowed nearby
then suddenly in slow motion'
rain fell down from the sky
my feet were streaked with the wet earth
the husky effervescence enveloped my mind
i felt the mud moulding beneath my hands
as i created my first figure with thine
enter now:the ghost of christmas present
i lay unknown on this berth
for i was taken straight from childhood
to an unyielding adult
my creativity was lost in the tomb of imitance
as art does not bring food to the table
the boy who once played abandoned
now lies chained to the daily syllablle
i do not wish to see the ghost of the future
as my present subdued my hungry talent
who had felt the need to create
which in this world of material is irrelevant
my tired mind shuts its musings
as i have to get up early tomorrow
to go to work,which i do not love
but life goes on,even with sorrow..
6 comments:
Yeah. We sacrifice so much for money... inspite of money not being the most important thing in life for us.
This (http://expresspallu.blogspot.com/2007/09/longings-i.html) was somewhat similar (in case you haven't already read).
yeah u did make me think bro !!
well nice one...the pillow one....
daddt ddo is said by guyz tooo..... love him so much,,, that i can call him anything... dosent matter if that sounds feminine....
cheers man.... nicely portrayed !!
peace out
hey pallu!i read ur longings and yeah they are very very similar..so b-fully written as well..dnt wrry..hvnt vanished anywhere..no my other blog is not so private for u oney..u kin read it..
and hey mani!no wat..m a girl..thats y i said daddy doo's are for daughters too,i love my dad as well...but its nice to b called a bro!!never been called one..and thanxxx 4 the comment
ss up miss ambrosia??
bro if i may call u !! lol
What's keeping you from writing, lady?
That also goes for the response to my email :P
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