Wednesday, September 24, 2008
A potter's smile
As the wheel rotates b'neath his hands
he creates pottery out of land
it spins with shapes of beautiful kind
that formed apart in his mind
cups n bowls n glasses n pots
he turns around the earthen clods
transforms them into his sweat and blood
his hands caked with sodden mud
burnt brown and fingernails black
those hands go on,they never slack
build wares and burn them in the kiln
and paint on them colourful skin
but of all the pottery made in while
the beauty lies in his pleasured smile
enchanting how hard he works to live
still manages that satisfaction puckering his lips
and we who buy those crafted piece
pay less to b happy but more to please
and lest it crumbles and breaks on the floor
we couldnt care less of the love it holds
of the sweat and the blood of those burnt brown hands
those created figures out of sodden lands
amidst the bowls and craftsmanship
we bought a smile from his lips
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7 comments:
wow.... true most of us dont really care if anything of that sort happens... but see the pain staking efforts of the men and women who actually create those.......
beautifull one....
loved the use of certain words....
cheers....
nice plot n theme,but still there r people who r thirsty even touch that pottery with their lips.this hard worked pottery is well taken care off by people who need it the most....
You almost get me in tears with your sensitive poetry.
Or maybe I'm just hormonal.
Love ya.
@mani
thanx for the comment bro...welcome back..
@p2
babe..we are women after all...love ur cmments..
and love ya back;)
how often do we switch relations sphinx ???? i mean couple of days bak i was the grandpa..... this comment makes me bro.... lol !!
cheers anyways..... blog like these make u think harder and harder on the different facets of life as such/......
just keep writing ......
god bless...
harry potter.
rspaetti at gmail dot com
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